Question

Have you ever had a good experience workshopping a paper? What was good or bad?

Peer Review

How to Peer Review in Canvas Video

  1. Click on the assignment that requires peer review, Essay 3 Rough Draft that you submit.
  2. On the right hand side of the submission box, you will see an assigned peer review link.
  3. Click link.

Revise

After you peer review, I want you to take a look at your own draft and add these four points.

  1. Add dialogue, find a spot to add in some dialogue.
  2. Add details of a character or an artifact in your narrative. What can you describe or add details too? Are you giving enough context so the reader follows along?
  3. Add an image to help tell the story. What image would help the reader? What image is related to your literacy?
  4. Effective Title. What should you title your essay? What would be a good title that makes your reader want to read the essay and prepares them for it.Fall Semester Examples

Grading Criteria

These are the five criteria I will be using to evaluate your narrative.

  1. Literacy
  2. Lesson
  3. Story
  4. Dialogue/Description
  5. Title/Images

Narrative Peer Review

This is the first of many peer reviews. Keep these things in mind.

  • Peer edit the same way you revise your own work.
  • Be specific in identifying problems or opportunities.
  • Offer suggestions for improvement.
  • Praise what is genuinely good in the paper.

Homework